Submission 4

Submission 4

Submission #4 is the fifth video and the fourth submission video in the TribeTwelve series.


"I should have kept in touch with Milo."


Noah and Milo return to Victor Park and walk on the park's nature trail. They decide to go to an observation tower in the center of the forest, only to find that it's closed. While leaving the forest, Milo sees The Slender man and starts running.


[Submission 4]

[Sunday Day 2]

[We went back to Victor Park.]

[This time, we walked along the park's nature trail.]

Noah: -the playground there.
Milo: Huh.
Noah: The built it after some kid died. I think the mom petitioned for it in May, and they got it built.
Milo: Hey Noah.
Noah: Huh?
Milo: Is that the tower you've been telling me about?
Noah: Oh, yeah.

[Camera zooms in on the observation tower.]

Noah: There's that tow-

[Audio cuts out]

Noah: -er. You can look at the sights and stuff. It's a neat place, wanna go there?
Milo: Sure.
Noah: Alright. It's back this way.

[The audio from the next part of the footage was highly distorted. It finally corrected itself after about five minutes.]

Noah: I dunno, I - what the heck? Did they close it off?
Milo: Something happen over here?
Noah: I dunno. Tower temporarily closed.

[Footage cuts to Milo holding the camera while sitting at a picnic table.]

Noah: Hey man, wanna get going?
Milo: Yeeeeeaaah.
Noah: What'd you wanna film anyway?
Milo: Nothing.
Noah: Okay. Let's get going. Gimme the camera.
Milo: [unintelligible]

[Footage cuts to Noah and Milo walking along a trail.]

[Noah's cell phone begins to ring.]

Noah: Hold on a second ... oh, it's my dad. Milo, can you hold the camera?
Milo: Fine.

[Visual tearing can be seen.]

[Noah answers phone.]

Noah: Hello? ... Dad [unintelligible] ... well I told you, I'm not going to come over until probably ... Saturday ... ?

[Milo pans the camera over to the right. Slender Man can be seen on the hill. Milo runs.]

Noah: Hey hey hey! Milo! [unintelligible] Where are you going? [unintelligible] Wait up! Wait up! Milo!

[After I caught up with Milo, he said he wanted to leave immediately and head home.]

[I had never seen him so afraid before.]

[Back then, I didn't think anything of the way Milo was acting.]

[But now, as I view this footage, I feel really bad that I didn't keep in contact with him.]


  • Starting at about 2:00 an oval with an "X" through it is visible, carved into the table.
  • When they're filming the tower The Observer's head can be seen for a brief moment on the top stairs.
  • The video tears at 2:33 just after the cell phone call. This is followed shortly after by slight video and audio distortion. At 2:46, Slender Man is visible.


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